Monday, 9 December 2019
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Kia Ora Corban
ReplyDeleteThis is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey program. Your News video on the incident between healthy food and unhealthy food was awesome to watch! I liked how you created a drawing to share about the incident.
I thought it was really cool how you were able to add the Mickey Mouse clip into your video, it was a really good way of showing the viewer what you were talking about.
When I was watching your News video I wondered if you had written a script for the video before filming - this will help for the show to run smoothly and will make it easier for you! Maybe you could also add some more detail into what happened during the fight between healthy and unhealthy food?
Your news video was very fun, I enjoyed watching it. I am looking forward to reading/watching your next blog post!
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Charlotte
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